Tenative Thesis "White Noise"

I am having a difficult time with this essay (well with most essay's) So here is a start to my thesis paragraph, I am sure I will be making changes before its all said and done. Sometimes i like to just get going and once i finish my paper I go back and make it all flow better by taking out or adding! I chose to follow the motif        " Fear of Death".

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Fear is always lurking, some its on the mind more than others. For the fear of death has crossed everyone's mind at some point. However in the book, "White Noise" the fear of death is a constant fear in their minds, it is surrounding them. Each person is dealing with this fear differently; from being completely terrified by it and running from the fear to being amused by it and accepting death for what it is. In this novel it is taught to us that no matter how you deal with death, it will be there at the end waiting for you alone.